"You have created some very memorable characters. In particular, Blake and Grant are unique and interesting. Blake’s voice - as the main narrator - is well done. She’s got a sassy, smart edge to her, but she’s also very much a woman (hence, falling for the charming David). There’s a great deal of humour and wit built into the story, along with the mystery. You have a nicely rounded plot that fills in all the details and is quite plausible. That’s not easy to do in a novella..."